I liked the first setup better Duke, with the words on two lines.
the police showed up and took his kids away. look where that smart mouth got ya, charlie! he's a fucking moron.
the police showed up and took his kids away. look where that smart mouth got ya, charlie! he's a fucking moron.
Reminds me of that old song that said something like:I think what Charlie is winning is The War on Drugs. He's defeated them by smoking all of them that has come his way.