Although i doubt i'll get any serious responses. I just wanna find out if i'm waisting my time. Mind you i enjoy writing for some reason. Its a new thing and its only this subject, but its very close to my heart and it incorporates alot of my thoughts and beliefs. So, heres Chapter 1. Chapter 2 is still a work in progress, but i'd love some opinions or suggestions and what you all think.
time to re-write. Thanks to all that read it..
time to re-write. Thanks to all that read it..
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