I put yours in blue so that they were easier to pick outFlannery O'Connor's A Good Man Is hard(needs capital and italics) To Find, like many of her stories, is about searching for the hint of a divine spark in all humans. It is a story about trying find that hint of divine grace in all human beings. (repetition of divine, please find other word in thesaurus)
Flannery starts of (should be off) her story with a grandmother that does not seem to care for her child, or her grandchildren other than how they might pay attention to her, she cares for her daughter in law so little that she does not even care to mention her name. The grandmother wants nothing more than to get her way in every conceivable facet of life. Despite this at the end of the story, when everything she loves is violently taken away from her, she sees the man who slew everyone in her life in a beautiful light. She reaches out to this man who is the epitome of evil and tries to envelope him in love in what might only be seen as divine grace.(divine, do you want to use this word again)
Many who read this story do not see this dramatic change as a divine revelation but instead as another selfish attempt by this lady to survive (do you want to put 'this lady?' seems too informal), to get her way, when no one else in her family did. (when no one else in her family did is informal, do you want to change?) Yet, if you read this story carefully you will notice that this lady (this lady again?) has never been for a lack of words. In a vain attempt to get what she wants, she waxes eloquently upon the evils of The Misfit and why the family should forsake the path to Florida. She natters (is natters too informal?) on incessantly to the family about what they are passing, she babbles to the babe about the sights and scenery that they pass on their drive, despite the fact that not one person is paying attention to her (as?) she talks. And she talks. And she talks. (Any thoughts on the repetition of "And she talks." as a formal sentence?) For her to be struck dumb is in itself a break from her character, then for her to be concerned with this man's soul, for her to believe that he is one of her flesh and blood and to reach out to him tenderly is such a break that one of the only explanations left to us is divine inspiration. The Misfit's reaction in itself could be confirmation of this. Going by what we know of The Misfit and of what he has done, why would anyone in that situation ever try to communicate with him that way? So The Misfit recoils, shocked, and ends her life.
Flannery O'Connor herself was deeply religious, as a result of this the majority of her stories seem to ask us if there is a divine streak within us (do they seem to ask or DO they ask? Does your college like you to be vague or to make assertions yourself?). In order to get us to ask this question her stories are typically extremely dark, not bound by any normal sentiments, and plainly realistic. As Flannery herself says in one of her letters “The stories are hard but they are hard because there is nothing harder or less sentimental than Christian realism.” She could have easily told a story where The Misfit realized his mistake and was redeemed by his faith and belief in Jesus meeting her divine inspiration, but that story would not have introduced any hard questions for the reader to pursue and think about. A happy ending makes the reader feel good, but too often it is unrealistic.
I've put any things that strike me in brackets, feel free to ignore. I have no idea if this is for academic reasons so my criticism may be mostly useless if not.
As a sidenote, I really shouldn't write when I'm tired, it comes out as a mess
I italicized it in my actual document, capitalized "Hard" fly
Will do
I deleted "of"
Repetition is good in certain instances, brings the mind back to the original thought, this one I'll leave.
She goes through the story un-named, just known as "Grandmother" or "Lady," do you have a better thought?
Entire sentence may need to be re-written
Stupid lady. Upon re-reading, I don't like it much either but as I said above I'm not sure what to use instead. Could toss "Matriarch" in there, but that implies that she's in charge of the family which she is most definitely not.
Natters might be too informal, but I like it. Trying to imply that she is just babbling
Yup, missed "as"
My thought is in red
My college is a bit of a joke, especially this class. When we were going over this story in class we started talking about themes in this story and most of them contradicted themes that had been previously brought up, discussed, and agreed upon that were within this story. I can put in that they seem or that they do, makes no nevermind to me
I also overuse commas