Mistakes

Sarcasmo said:
I would grade this pile of literary dung a D-.

Horrible grammar usage, too many big words, and too many attempts at sounding profound by misusing said big words.
'+' and '-' are to give people a higher feeling of achievement.

A 'D' is a fucking 'D'. And that's how it should be.

Oh and I'd have to agree with your summative assessment of the post. I'd have to go with ungradable though.
 
FlamingGlory said:
I rate this post D-.

Horrible attempt at trying to be FlamingGlory. Overuse of the adjective "big" when actually trying to say "pretentious". The fact "said" in this context is only used in legal documents or opinions, the proper term is "aforementioned" or "mentioned previously" but could be avoided completely by restructuring the sentence.
Don't you mean previously mentioned? 'mentioned previously' is something I'd expect from a 16 year old writing about Macbeth.
 
Galen said:
Don't you mean previously mentioned? 'mentioned previously' is something I'd expect from a 16 year old writing about Macbeth.
Adjectives follow verbs in my universe.