band logo...good or bad?

It's not really much of a logo as much as it is a picture with some words. Could it work in one color? Not really. Not really much of suspicious package, More like suspicious Baggage.

I shortened the "package" and incorporated the text in to the logo.

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It's not really much of a logo as much as it is a picture with some words. Could it work in one color? Not really. Not really much of suspicious package, More like suspicious Baggage.

I shortened the "package" and incorporated the text in to the logo.

26045f8da7492890.jpg

i like, i like. i think it punches better as all in one. i do like the idea of the stencil letters like someone said earlier.